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Boo
Who knows what thoughts are wrought
when wordsmiths write about slaughter
with words which are whimsical and trite
and inimical to the sanctity of human life.
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Re: Boo
Nice word-play Mark. The line-ending near rhymes are nice. They would be made better with a metre pattern to the lines. While they appear of similar length, the syllable count keeps expanding.
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