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A poem that lost its voice
A poem that lost its voice
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Last edited by Matty11 on Thu Feb 11, 2021 2:22 pm, edited 3 times in total.
- Tracy Mitchell
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Re: A poem that lost its voice
Love this Phil.
Awesome opening line -- so graphic.
S.2 L.1 -- delete "the"? - just asking.
Cheers.
T
Awesome opening line -- so graphic.
S.2 L.1 -- delete "the"? - just asking.
Cheers.
T
Re: A poem that lost its voice
That's a neat little poem Phil
- Sharon Leigh
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Re: A poem that lost its voice
Wonderful, kept wanting there to be some allusion to the waters being "shallow" too
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Re: A poem that lost its voice
Usually avoid poems about poems but I enjoyed this very much, with its brief, biting images.
Re: A poem that lost its voice
Thanks Trish, Sharon, Colm and T.
Agreed T. Thanks for that.
cheers
phil
S.2 L.1 -- delete "the"?
Agreed T. Thanks for that.
cheers
phil