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National Poetry Month Celebration 2019 - Post Poems Here!

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Re: National Poetry Month Celebration 2019 - Post Poems Here!

Post by Gyppo » Sun Apr 14, 2019 7:24 am

lisaeagle65 wrote:
Fri Apr 12, 2019 7:32 pm
:) it's kinda fun to write a poem a day. Thank you for this.

Lisa.  This is one of the great secrets of all writing, poetry, prose, whatever.  Even fairly dry technical stuff.  If you do it all the time it does get easier, like exercise.  Obvious really, but many writers seem to resist this simple fact.  They try to train themselves to be more productive, to not waste words writing less than perfect text.

There are no shortcuts.  No magic template.  But no writing is wasted if it teaches you something, if it opens you up to that inner flow.

This doesn't mean all writing is fit to share with the public, but once you begin to get a feel for what might work and what doesn't you'll find yourself subconsciously nudged to the better side.  That's when you learn to trust your own instincts.

Once you no longer have to think so much about the 'mechanics' of it, the nuts and bolts of sentence construction and grammar, it frees your mind up for the more creative aspects.  More about the subject and the feelings it exposes for you.

It lets you into the character or characters you are writing about, cranks up your empathy sensors to full power and sometimes even beyond.  When you get that involved it seeps through into the reader as well.

In your poem about the eagle, flying high, observing, I was seeing the world through his eyes, feeling the lift of the currents beneath his wings.  I also felt his solitude, a double edged blessing/curse.

Gyppo

 
I've been writing ever since I realised I could.  Storytelling since I started talking.  Poetry however comes and goes  ;-)

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Re: National Poetry Month Celebration 2019 - Post Poems Here!

Post by ajduclos » Sun Apr 14, 2019 7:48 am

Day 14

 
Winked Out
  
The last bit of snow-ice
went away today 

Tucked in dark sunless shadow
it quietly survived
neglected
alone 

I watched as it shrunk and sank
dimmed and dissolved
wasted out of sight
ceased to be 

It winked out
sorta like
dementia

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Re: National Poetry Month Celebration 2019 - Post Poems Here!

Post by Lecram06 » Sun Apr 14, 2019 7:56 am

ajduclos wrote:
Sun Apr 14, 2019 7:48 am
Day 14

 
Winked Out
  
The last bit of snow-ice
went away today 

Tucked in dark sunless shadow
it quietly survived
neglected
alone 

I watched as it shrunk and sank
dimmed and dissolved
wasted out of sight
ceased to be 

It winked out
sorta like
dementia

Aime,  Your alliterations strike starkly, seemingly effortless. The layers of meaning abound. Marcel

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Re: National Poetry Month Celebration 2019 - Post Poems Here!

Post by Lecram06 » Sun Apr 14, 2019 7:59 am

indar wrote:
Sat Apr 13, 2019 5:45 pm
Indar: A "triolet" belongs to family of medieval songs like the "rondeau".  The first line appears three times.
When you publish your chap book of triolets I suggest a beautifully rendered drawing of a trillium for the cover art. :) 

Indar,  I had not thought of a chapbook, but the thought of a trillium brings on a smile. Marcel

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Re: National Poetry Month Celebration 2019 - Post Poems Here!

Post by Tracy Mitchell » Sun Apr 14, 2019 8:01 am

Marcel - you like Indar's suggestion? She's got a trillium of 'em. :D

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Post by Tracy Mitchell » Sun Apr 14, 2019 8:02 am

#14


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Last edited by Tracy Mitchell on Sat Jun 22, 2019 10:39 am, edited 2 times in total.

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Post by Deb » Sun Apr 14, 2019 8:10 am

Tracy Mitchell wrote:
Sun Apr 14, 2019 8:01 am
Marcel - you like Indar's suggestion? She's got a trillium of 'em. :D

Clever poem pun.
:D

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Re: National Poetry Month Celebration 2019 - Post Poems Here!

Post by Deb » Sun Apr 14, 2019 8:13 am

Cursed Gift

Hurricane of churned thoughts
Ripped away, crash into one another
in a mess of jumbled debris.
Strewn haphazardly,
they litter the mind.
Encircled by violent, raging clouds
I step into the eye.
Clarity enters and bids me, "Hurry,
capture what you can and hold on 
because you can’t stay here long."
A gift cursed in unpredictability.
Such is life with A.D.D.

~Deb

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Re: National Poetry Month Celebration 2019 - Post Poems Here!

Post by ajduclos » Sun Apr 14, 2019 8:48 am

Oh lord, Deb - yes.............
Aj

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Re: National Poetry Month Celebration 2019 - Post Poems Here!

Post by ajduclos » Sun Apr 14, 2019 8:50 am

Tracy Mitchell wrote:
Sun Apr 14, 2019 8:02 am
#14


Oxidize

You are far too young.
Skin unblemished.
Bounce drives your step,
eyes wide as a mound of porcupines.
Years yet from honest depravity, you
still have no history. I chart myself by scars,
but where are yours--where are your scars?
You haven’t stolen, cheated or lied enough.
I can’t trust you.


~
Tracy - truth put into words, so few words, elegantly, directly...........
Aj
 

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