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Tracy Mitchell
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Post by Tracy Mitchell » Sun Apr 07, 2019 7:04 am

#7

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Post by Tinker1111 » Sun Apr 07, 2019 7:04 am

April 7
Unfettered

The vagabond’s trail
winds without destination.
I’d love to hike
unfettered by expectation.
~~ jvg

“Notes:"

24 Syllables
Prompt: vagabond
Prompt: hike

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Post by Lecram06 » Sun Apr 07, 2019 7:45 am

Triolet 7

You wear the crown of thorns
You pay the price of truth
You tease us by the horns
You wake us in the morn
You bless our lack of couth
You wear the crown of thorns
You pay the price of truth
 

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Post by Colm Roe » Sun Apr 07, 2019 7:53 am

Loving this Tracy.
The last stanza is genius.

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Post by Tracy Mitchell » Sun Apr 07, 2019 8:43 am

Thanks Colm.

Marcel -- You have find new avenues with the triolet. :)

Judi -- I understand this poem also fulfilled 2 prompts? Very well done. :)

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Post by indar » Sun Apr 07, 2019 9:01 am

April 7

Poetic Genius

Billy Collins does not keep
a gun in his house
lest he shoot John Yamrus' dog

who barks
at
the
neighbors,
the
UPS
man,
the vacuum
cleaner,
dust mop,
broom.

Billy Collins tries to distract himself
with a Beethoven symphony turned up full blast,
the 1812 I think--what a racket,
yap yap yap yap boom yap yap…


Written as a response to 2 poems:

https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/another ... in-the-hou

And Yamrus' poem: My Dogs, John Yamrus: New and Selected Poems, Lummox Press,  pg 74

 

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Post by Tracy Mitchell » Sun Apr 07, 2019 9:06 am

Indar - how delightful! Response poems are an untapped reservoir for NaPo, I think.
You tapped these well -- right down to the Yamrus Return Key technique. :D

Billy Collins, indeed. :)

Cheers.

T

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Post by binx » Sun Apr 07, 2019 9:22 am

4/7 poem

Sorry, I’m Lonely Tonight

In despair I toss
a petty stone up into air

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Post by Lecram06 » Sun Apr 07, 2019 10:07 am

I am pleased and tutored by your offerings, dear poets. Marcel

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Post by Tracy Mitchell » Sun Apr 07, 2019 10:20 am

Lecram06 wrote:
Sun Apr 07, 2019 10:07 am
I am pleased and tutored by your offerings, dear poets. Marcel


I feel the same -- what an array of authors. :)

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