Triolet 3

Lecram06 · Post by **Lecram06** » Wed Apr 03, 2019 7:21 am

He drills down to the marrow,
Extracts a hardened core.
I look up and see sorrow.
He drills down to the marrow.
He bids me now to follow,
To let him mine the ore.
He drills down to the marrow,
Extracts a hardened core.

ajduclos · Post by **ajduclos** » Wed Apr 03, 2019 7:39 am

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh.........

DocCon · Post by **DocCon** » Wed Apr 03, 2019 9:31 am

Induced a great deal of unease -- Bone marrow transplant. Well done.

Janet 77 · Post by **Janet 77** » Wed Apr 03, 2019 11:35 am

Wow. I think this one is going to haunt me.

Post by **Tracy Mitchell** » Wed Apr 03, 2019 1:08 pm

Marcel your pen drills deeply

lisaeagle65 · Post by **lisaeagle65** » Wed Apr 03, 2019 1:13 pm

Powerful!!

Lecram06 · Post by **Lecram06** » Wed Apr 03, 2019 5:51 pm

And Triolets are first of all a song. I have not found the music for this one. Thanks guys and gal. Marcel

ajduclos · Post by **ajduclos** » Wed Apr 03, 2019 7:08 pm

I'll be working on the music...............

Post by **Tracy Mitchell** » Wed Apr 03, 2019 9:12 pm

Knee-cymbals, that's the answer!

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