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Chronicles

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Tim J Brennan

Re: Chronicles

Post by Tim J Brennan » Tue Jan 08, 2019 9:59 am

Deb wrote:
Tue Jan 08, 2019 3:27 am
Weren't they just?



Good  ;)

Just what?  

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Re: Chronicles

Post by Deb » Tue Jan 08, 2019 8:50 pm

Stellar.

I was agreeing with Tracy. 

 

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Re: Chronicles

Post by Tim J Brennan » Wed Jan 09, 2019 10:36 am

Deb wrote:
Tue Jan 08, 2019 8:50 pm
Stellar.

I was agreeing with Tracy. 

 

Thanks.  And I apologize, I didn't see the "Good" on your previous post. My interface w/this site is weird. Sometimes I can't see the entire screen...

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Re: Chronicles

Post by Granda » Sun Jan 13, 2019 7:14 pm

At Fifty Nine and Three Quarters I'm racing to catch up. So for me the first three lines are a must. The way I feel at the mo is 60 isn't old, so writing your memoirs would seem a little presumptious. You know?
After that, I have to say, I preferred Indy's re-working of the poem. It reads better to me.

But what do I know? I'm just an old fart lost in a fog. :D  

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