She Lives Anon

[Tim J Brennan]

Brutality
has always been
a player 

and, yes,
she does worry
about her future— 

in another life,
she was worth it; 

it’s good enough
for now.

[indar]

Hi Tim,

Another of your spare and ambiguous pieces. It's the final line that puzzles me--perhaps it is a conclusion that she tolerates brutality because of that axiom "better the devil you do know". A sad but true dilemma for many. Thoughtful poem.

[Colm Roe]

I like the brevity, there's just enough information for the reader to fill in the gaps...to create their own version of the N's life. 
It's a neat and sad read, thanks for sharing.
 

[lshmael]

I think you have done well with what you have written. Although I probably would have enjoyed it more if it was a bit longer.

[Tim J Brennan]

Hi Tim,

Another of your spare and ambiguous pieces. It's the final line that puzzles me--perhaps it is a conclusion that she tolerates brutality because of that axiom "better the devil you do know". A sad but true dilemma for many. Thoughtful poem.

Not sure "tolerate" is the right word, but many women are in abusive relationships, indar, not of their choice. Thanks.

[Tim J Brennan]

I like the brevity, there's just enough information for the reader to fill in the gaps...to create their own version of the N's life. 
It's a neat and sad read, thanks for sharing.
 

You're welcome.
 

[Tim J Brennan]

I think you have done well with what you have written. Although I probably would have enjoyed it more if it was a bit longer.

I think you have done well with what you have written also, Ishmael.  I too would have enjoyed it more if it was a bit longer. Thank you.

[Tracy Mitchell]

Line breaks are stunning.
The iambic closing resonates.
A poem with a punch.

T

[Tim J Brennan]

Line breaks are stunning.
The iambic closing resonates.
A poem with a punch.

T

Thank you, Tracy.  Appreciate your words.