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Gyppo
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Choices.

Post by Gyppo » Sat Apr 07, 2018 10:20 am

Indar's poem about her father's wartime experiences brought this back to the surface.  Written a year or so ago when I found myself remembering one of Dad's rare insights into his war in The Royal Navy.  Normally he glossed over the memories, but sometimes he lifted the curtain briefly on a particular image.

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Choices

Men in the water
smothered by burning oil
as their ship sinks 
and the U-boats seek fresh prey.

Praying, as the convoy scatters,
some nameless gunner will ask permission
to put the poor sods out of their misery,
and some captain has the balls to say yes.

Gyppo
I've been writing ever since I realised I could.  Storytelling since I started talking.  Poetry however comes and goes  ;-)

indar
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Re: Choices.

Post by indar » Sat Apr 07, 2018 2:56 pm

Wrenching Gyppo,
Circumstances might change but these realities do not.

Tim J Brennan

Re: Choices.

Post by Tim J Brennan » Sat Apr 07, 2018 3:30 pm

My uncle drove a tank up through Italy under Patton.  He only told one story that I remember.

In a nutshell:  tank hit, fire, my uncle climbs up and out, reaches back down in to pull the gunner out b/c he's wounded.  Tank explodes, throws Fred about 20 feet. When he stands up, all he has is the guy's arm.  

 

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Re: Choices.

Post by indar » Sun Apr 08, 2018 7:53 am

They had a difficult time talking about it but we should.

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