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Matty11
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by Matty11 » Sat Oct 23, 2021 10:21 am
Mark wrote: ↑Sat Oct 23, 2021 6:55 am
Ah yes, the humble chip butty... I'm partial to cheese and onion crisps with mayo,
biltong and olives on buttered ciabatta. Tastes better than it sounds...
I think that would be a challenge, though I do like cheese and onion crisps
Cheers for the recommendation, I'll check it out.
Phil
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Interlace1
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by Interlace1 » Tue Oct 26, 2021 2:27 pm
Mark summed this up excellently. No need for fancy garnishes.
Good poetry, albeit (intentionally) without the usual flourishes.
The extended metaphor is nicely and not too obviously extended. Just right.
luke
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Matty11
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by Matty11 » Wed Oct 27, 2021 1:13 am
Cheers Luke. Always nice to see you around, sharing poetry.
Phil
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Dansinger
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by Dansinger » Thu Oct 28, 2021 5:19 am
Ooooh! I really like this one.
(Though I won't be eating any chip butties. Ever. The thought alone is enough to make my stomach churn.
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Matty11
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by Matty11 » Thu Oct 28, 2021 5:54 am
:lol: I guess it is a Brit thing
So what is Dan's foodie pleasure?
cheers
Phil
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Colm Roe
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by Colm Roe » Thu Oct 28, 2021 7:17 pm
The simple (and sinful) pleasure of a chip butty
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Matty11
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by Matty11 » Thu Oct 28, 2021 11:46 pm
Are you tiring of Italia pasta Colm? Surely not the desserts!
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Colm Roe
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by Colm Roe » Fri Oct 29, 2021 6:49 pm
Not a fan of pasta/pizzas etc., but love their desserts...cannolis especially
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by Colm Roe » Sat Oct 30, 2021 7:49 pm
That's where I tasted my first cannoli