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indar
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South West Style

Post by indar » Sat Feb 10, 2018 2:54 pm

Coyote yippity ricochets up-canyon: eerie.
Add to that full moon shine on Mexican pottery
but no saguaro. Missed the whole enchilada by a cactus.
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Tracy Mitchell
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Re: South West Style

Post by Tracy Mitchell » Sat Feb 10, 2018 4:04 pm

Very playful- the last line had me laughing.  No saguaro, indeed.   :)

 
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indar
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Re: South West Style

Post by indar » Sat Feb 10, 2018 11:47 pm

Thanks Tracy. Laughter is good.
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Tracy Mitchell
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Re: South West Style

Post by Tracy Mitchell » Sun Feb 11, 2018 7:49 am

It is.  So is sharp, clever writing.  :)
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mfwilkie
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Re: South West Style

Post by mfwilkie » Tue Feb 20, 2018 8:44 am

Enjoyed!
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indar
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Re: South West Style

Post by indar » Thu Feb 22, 2018 10:00 am

Thank you
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