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Tracy Mitchell
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by Tracy Mitchell » Thu Aug 08, 2019 8:11 am
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Adlaide
Vassar alum
Invented the Cinquain
Suggests a reader to rename
Crapsey
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Colm Roe
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by Colm Roe » Sat Aug 10, 2019 9:59 am
My wife who's called Olive
I love her so much
Even though she only has one leg
And walks with a crutch
She has rough grey skin
She's not pretty or fair
I love running my fingers
Through her thin greasy hair
She can't cook or bake
She's as lazy as sin
But she reads all my poems
Before chucking them in the bin
Our love is eternal
she's six months to live
She's wealthy, unhealthy
My poor dear Olive.
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ajduclos
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by ajduclos » Sat Aug 10, 2019 10:48 am
Colm - you missed a Capital !!!!!!
Aj
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indar
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by indar » Sat Aug 10, 2019 10:50 am
YOU SLACKERS!!
You are supposed to be writing terrible poems!
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Colm Roe
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by Colm Roe » Sat Aug 10, 2019 11:14 am
ajduclos wrote: ↑Sat Aug 10, 2019 10:48 am
Colm - you missed a Capital !!!!!!
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Aj
I promise to do worse next time
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Colm Roe
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by Colm Roe » Sat Aug 10, 2019 11:15 am
indar wrote: ↑Sat Aug 10, 2019 10:50 am
YOU SLACKERS!!
You are supposed to be writing terrible poems!
In fairness it was pretty bad
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