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Triolet 10

Back to Walmart and Morgan Chase
I've run out of what I do not need.
The game is hot. I'm waiting for the Ace.
Back to Walmart and Morgan Chase.
I stayed behind. I lost all face.
The time is ripe. I cease, concede.
Back to Walmart and Morgan Chase.
I've run out of what I do not need.

Good morning Marcel. Your closing couplet today is choice!

Triolet #10 was concise and deeply amusing. Tracy your piece evoked a space and a scene on the cusp of profound and deep revelation. Excellent work both of you;-)

Doc Con & Juris

Marcel -- sorry on Tracy's behalf for his posting of his poem on your thread. The matter has been remedied and the author sanctioned. We expect it will not happen again.

Ah, Tom - thanks for imposing a bit of discipline on these unruly masses !!!!!!!