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Bone 4/7/2019
#deepadaption

The boat
we plan
to weave
into our
lives was
poked tapped
prodded and
inspected to -
day surprised
how bone tired
integrating a
dream can be

Too tired to
write a poem 
caught up in 
the marrowed
cartilaginous
syntax the
embodied
structures
of Living
Breathing
ordinary
poesis.
 Too tired towrite a poem caught up in the marrowedcartilaginoussyntax theembodiedstructuresof LivingBreathingordinarypoesis.

DocCon - you seriously challenge your reader, in a good way - there is always the payoff. I am really enjoying reading your poetry

DocCon - ditto Tracy's comments.  You force me to think, expansive, but it hurts - I need to grease those wheels and cogs