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Day 4 - Snowdrops

Posted: Thu Apr 04, 2019 9:34 am
by ajduclos
Snowdrops 

Acknowledging Joe's birthday
the Snowdrops emerge
from their winter crypt
newly exposed
to the giver of life
forming their bells
seasonally white
delicate
chancing the vagaries
of early Spring
in this part of Maine
known as South Finland.  

Time marches
inexorably onward -
denying aging's realities
denies the truth of life.  

As one contemplates
the vastness of cosmic
metaphysical inevitability
death and rebirth
asleep and awake
freeze and thaw
like the tiny Snowdrops
ringing in the season
and natal anniversary
beauty comes from rising
and greeting the sun
from living today
from aging and being young.  

Re: Day 4 - Snowdrops

Posted: Thu Apr 04, 2019 9:47 am
by Tom
Greetings,

You needn't post your poems both here and in the thread entitled Post Your Poems Here.

One or the other is sufficient.

You seem to be enjoying this; glad you are here.

Re: Day 4 - Snowdrops

Posted: Thu Apr 04, 2019 10:11 am
by ajduclos
Thanks, Tom.  Guess I misinterpreted Tracy's comments.

Re: Day 4 - Snowdrops

Posted: Sun Apr 07, 2019 8:02 pm
by lisaeagle65
great observation.    "Denies the truth of life."  very good

Re: Day 4 - Snowdrops

Posted: Mon Apr 08, 2019 6:26 am
by ajduclos
Thanks, Lisaeagle65.  I'm having fun writing, trying to learn the craft.  I truly enjoy your writings.

Re: Day 4 - Snowdrops

Posted: Mon Apr 08, 2019 7:38 am
by DocCon
An exceptional reflection on aging love/loss rebirth -- all the stuff from which great poems come;-)

Juris

Re: Day 4 - Snowdrops

Posted: Mon Apr 08, 2019 8:06 am
by ajduclos
Thanks you, DonCon, for your kind words.