Triolet 2

[Lecram06]

Sitting in the waiting room,
We stare and look alike.
Visions beyond the door do loom,
Sitting in the waiting room.
We wait together for the womb.
We swim against the dike,
Sitting in the waiting room.
We stare and look alike.

[Tracy Mitchell]

Marvelous triolet -- you have a feel for these.

[indar]

Love this one Marcel--its so insightful now that you mention it--we do look alike. Your first day poem shimmered through my whole day after I read it.

[Janet 77]

Nicely done, my friend, and very relatable. I think most people in waiting rooms have sadly similar expressions. You captured it well...and in a Triolet!