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National Poetry Month Celebration 2019 - Post Poems Here!

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lisaeagle65
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Post by lisaeagle65 » Mon Apr 08, 2019 6:19 pm

WOW Michelle. That took my breath away. Love the imagery and meaning. 

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Post by lisaeagle65 » Mon Apr 08, 2019 6:46 pm

Letters

I trace my name
On a frosted window
And watch the letters
Fade into tiny drops
That dribble together
And run down the glass
Drawing lines
That look like sadness.

ajduclos
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Post by ajduclos » Mon Apr 08, 2019 7:01 pm

aahhhhh...  my name... lines that look like sadness...  beautiful, evocative

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Colm Roe
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Post by Colm Roe » Mon Apr 08, 2019 7:05 pm

30 ways to die.
#9

Some regrets linger 
only slightly uncomfortable,
a dull back pain, from
too much time on a sofa, or
having that extra drink
when you knew better,
and it's in the bible anyway 
sloth and gluttony, 
and the other five,
so many sins to enjoy...and so little time.

But some regrets ride jack hammers
without an off switch,
two teams work in tandem
one inside your skull, trying to get out.
Outside, just as enthusiastic
their combined efforts
vise a prison without parole. 

A farm, a toddler, a reversing 4x4
driven by her father   
one moment, one death


Some regrets venom, immobilise.
Jigsaw pieces liquefied,
try as you may
you'll never got them back together again. 

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Colm Roe
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Post by Colm Roe » Mon Apr 08, 2019 7:13 pm

Eye like this one lots Sharon. 
Are you vaping?  :o   :)
 

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Colm Roe
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Post by Colm Roe » Mon Apr 08, 2019 7:28 pm

lisaeagle65 wrote:
Mon Apr 08, 2019 6:46 pm
Letters

I trace my name
On a frosted window
And watch the letters
Fade into tiny drops
That dribble together
And run down the glass
Drawing lines
That look like sadness.
Love this lots...but not fond of Caps on every line  :)
 

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Sharon Leigh
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Post by Sharon Leigh » Mon Apr 08, 2019 9:36 pm

Colm Roe wrote:
Mon Apr 08, 2019 7:13 pm
Eye like this one lots Sharon. 
Are you vaping?  :o   :)

Hah Colm! Thanks. No, not I...was able to put cigs away permanently last September without that crutch thankfully. This is a fiction, Just having fun with NaPo :)

PS #9 is wrenching 
"well for a lonely soul, you're having such a nice time" - Keane

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Post by Colm Roe » Tue Apr 09, 2019 3:25 am

Another one based on a true story...happened to a cousin of mine many years.
Glad you're still off the fags Sharon :)

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Post by Tracy Mitchell » Tue Apr 09, 2019 7:42 am

#9
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Post by Lecram06 » Tue Apr 09, 2019 7:46 am

Tracy,

The title is pregnant with associations. The last two lines reveal twists the reader's mind into wakefulness. Marcel

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