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National Poetry Month Celebration 2019 - Post Poems Here!
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Early Spring chores demand attention
and my muse is taking vacation -
perhaps there may be a connection
Day 16
Urge To Write
(I wrote this whilst in the midst of a writing deluge, my muse finally stepping forward out of the dungeon, allowed the light of day - a huge cathartic explosion from decades of witnessing and concealing, suppressing, self-destructive behavior of a most dear loved one. I finally could take it no more and with the help of my muse deemed that person "Dead To Me", one of many poem/songs written in a very short period of time.
Anyway, I wrote this to try to get a grip on all that writing that simply had to happen.
I share it now, with you... and I apologize for any sensibilities I may offend.)
Like Willie Nelson says
when he writes
it's cause its just gotta get out
it might be a brain fart
but it's just got to get out
when I need to write
it starts out
like it's all backed up
all stuck and bound up
like brain constipation
a shut down of the cranial-thought tract
stopping all easy thinking
yet
demanding
insisting
commanding
to be released
excreted
after much pain
and dread
what is puked out
comes out
in a diarrhea rush
that splashes
on the page
raw emotion
and feeling
not very complicated
far from refined
just simple stuff
a brain system flush
from the gut
thru the hand
onto paper
a core dump
I leave the intricate
sculpted stuff
to the Van Gogh's
who must cut off
their own
ears
to colorfully elicit
artistic magnificence
I'll just continue
yo pull my pudd
and let the sputum
splatter willie nilly
how and where
it may
Feb 24, 2013
and my muse is taking vacation -
perhaps there may be a connection
Day 16
Urge To Write
(I wrote this whilst in the midst of a writing deluge, my muse finally stepping forward out of the dungeon, allowed the light of day - a huge cathartic explosion from decades of witnessing and concealing, suppressing, self-destructive behavior of a most dear loved one. I finally could take it no more and with the help of my muse deemed that person "Dead To Me", one of many poem/songs written in a very short period of time.
Anyway, I wrote this to try to get a grip on all that writing that simply had to happen.
I share it now, with you... and I apologize for any sensibilities I may offend.)
Like Willie Nelson says
when he writes
it's cause its just gotta get out
it might be a brain fart
but it's just got to get out
when I need to write
it starts out
like it's all backed up
all stuck and bound up
like brain constipation
a shut down of the cranial-thought tract
stopping all easy thinking
yet
demanding
insisting
commanding
to be released
excreted
after much pain
and dread
what is puked out
comes out
in a diarrhea rush
that splashes
on the page
raw emotion
and feeling
not very complicated
far from refined
just simple stuff
a brain system flush
from the gut
thru the hand
onto paper
a core dump
I leave the intricate
sculpted stuff
to the Van Gogh's
who must cut off
their own
ears
to colorfully elicit
artistic magnificence
I'll just continue
yo pull my pudd
and let the sputum
splatter willie nilly
how and where
it may
Feb 24, 2013
Re: National Poetry Month Celebration 2019 - Post Poems Here!
Oh the stanza "I carry the salt of the earth on my tongue," and the closing words! MarcelNicoleMichaels wrote: ↑Tue Apr 16, 2019 4:26 amMEET ASIAN GIRLS NOW
I had a love for you big as China,
and I have stopped fighting for you.
I am not from
Singapore or Siam,
some small village in Vietnam
where they sell their daughters
all day long
to buy rice.
The last time I made rice, I burned it,
and you are not going to find me
posing by a palm tree,
wearing nothing but a coconut.
Nobody should be forced to dress in husks,
go down on a drink straw
for the camera,
as if the light itself
could be traded and poached.
I am a white oak,
rooted within shouting distance
of hurricanes.
I don’t get rug burns from doing it
doggie style,
but I carry
the salt of the earth on my tongue,
my open-mouthed kiss,
something you wake to
between scrolls.
Re: National Poetry Month Celebration 2019 - Post Poems Here!
Tracy,Tracy Mitchell wrote: ↑Tue Apr 16, 2019 9:22 am#16
Nowhere
I assumed it was alive and I assumed
it was human, the figure curled
fetal on the front steps of the shelter.
Later, a blue-shirted man walked toward me
wearing food service or first responder
or surgical gloves.
He carried a Styrofoam cup
as if it were a urine sample.
I crossed the street in mid-block.
He did too, and soon passed me,
then waited at the corner for the light
despite there being no cars.
I crossed and kept walking. When
the light changed, so did he.
By the middle of the next block
he caught and passed me again.
Papers protruded from a back pocket
of his black jeans – could have been
boarding passes, tax notices,
or blood test results.
I once had a blue shirt - work shirt,
and once my beard was dark
like his.
An orange in his left hand–he carried it
like a dead sparrow, or a cup of fruit,
or a vitamin pill bottle now empty.
I am certain that he did not regard me.
I am certain I have never been him.
We stand side by side, traffic
from both directions.
~
I read the poem feeling that I was an observer in the poet's dream. . . and the details captivate. Marcel
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I concur - this Frenchman was watching the same dream - nice bit of writing !!
Aj
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Tremendously vivid Poem. Tracy
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Tracy,
It put me in mind of walking through a city/town which was once familiar but you haven't been there for years. The geography is the same, but everything else has a dreamlike 'offness' to it.
Gyppo
It put me in mind of walking through a city/town which was once familiar but you haven't been there for years. The geography is the same, but everything else has a dreamlike 'offness' to it.
Gyppo
I've been writing ever since I realised I could. Storytelling since I started talking. Poetry however comes and goes
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That's a thing about cities -- the buildings always outlast the people, rotations of people, generations of people.
T
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Re: National Poetry Month Celebration 2019 - Post Poems Here!
You are the hornet
humming
near honeysuckle vines
I mistake for
honeybee
The still log with eyes
floating
patient
in Florida waters
You are the shoreline
blue and frothed above
which tugs below
cold
dark
strong
The funny mole
on nose or cheek
The Bolton Strid
The Box Jelly
water in water on water
invisible
The Blue Ring
cute and tiny
in the shallows
.
humming
near honeysuckle vines
I mistake for
honeybee
The still log with eyes
floating
patient
in Florida waters
You are the shoreline
blue and frothed above
which tugs below
cold
dark
strong
The funny mole
on nose or cheek
The Bolton Strid
The Box Jelly
water in water on water
invisible
The Blue Ring
cute and tiny
in the shallows
.
- Tracy Mitchell
- Posts: 3586
- Joined: Sun Jan 07, 2018 3:58 pm
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Lovely, Sharon. Layers and layers, and yet very personal
Bolton Strid -- new to me. I love the education I get here.
T
Bolton Strid -- new to me. I love the education I get here.
T