even if
it ends
tomorrow
hummingbirds
crumble Spring
stops dead
reverts becomes
unusable sap
sucks rather
than flows
DNA
bends folds mutilates
back into redacted
matter pre -
panspermia
the BANG
goes wuff
while light
destined tobe
all things
collapses and asks
why nothing
instead of
something
Something
can be
done
right
now.
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Re: Day 18: even if
a good study, and perfect conclusion - right now
I really enjoy your writing and style
Aj
I really enjoy your writing and style
Aj
Re: Day 18: even if
powerful images - crumbling hummingbirds, DNA retreating to the stars (my version as I don't have your poem in front of me), trees forming sap for naught... Makes me ponder... What would I do today if this were happening around me? Thanks for sharing