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Lecram06
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Triolet 10

Post by Lecram06 » Wed Apr 10, 2019 7:10 am

Triolet 10

Back to Walmart and Morgan Chase
I've run out of what I do not need.
The game is hot. I'm waiting for the Ace.
Back to Walmart and Morgan Chase.
I stayed behind. I lost all face.
The time is ripe. I cease, concede.
Back to Walmart and Morgan Chase.
I've run out of what I do not need.
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Tracy Mitchell
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Re: Triolet 10

Post by Tracy Mitchell » Wed Apr 10, 2019 7:13 am

Good morning Marcel. Your closing couplet today is choice! :D :D
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Re: Triolet 10

Post by DocCon » Wed Apr 10, 2019 11:28 am

Triolet #10 was concise and deeply amusing. Tracy your piece evoked a space and a scene on the cusp of profound and deep revelation. Excellent work both of you;-)

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Tom
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Re: Triolet 10

Post by Tom » Wed Apr 10, 2019 12:41 pm

Marcel -- sorry on Tracy's behalf for his posting of his poem on your thread. The matter has been remedied and the author sanctioned. We expect it will not happen again.
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Re: Triolet 10

Post by ajduclos » Thu Apr 11, 2019 6:17 am

Ah, Tom - thanks for imposing a bit of discipline on these unruly masses !!!!!!!
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