Just to show I can write shorter pieces
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Never grow bitter
Bare feet, faded denims,
long straight black hair
turning prematurely grey.
A waist-high Irish Wolfhound
stands placidly alongside.
Leashed on a thick rope,
with a leather bound loop
around her skinny wrist,
jostling for space with blue beads
and a well worn mystery plait.
A Grandma by thirty,
a great Gran before forty five.
She'll be nearing sixty now,
heading for grand matriarch status.
A life lived 'on the wild side',
but still strangely innocent.
Some people roll with the blows,
own their own mistakes,
and never grow bitter.
Gyppo
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Never grow bitter
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Re: Never grow bitter
Shorter piece? 3 verses, 19 lines, 89 words.
You bet.
So short we'll call this Gyppo Haiku.
Very nice poem, by the way. I like the way you wind the story.
Cheers.
T
You bet.
So short we'll call this Gyppo Haiku.
Very nice poem, by the way. I like the way you wind the story.
Cheers.
T
Re: Never grow bitter
Gyppo Haiku
I wrote a haiku once, with the correct syllable count, explaining why I don't like writing haikus. It's in the archives somewhere, but so far I can't find it. I may have to search through the 'old place'. But not tonight.
I wrote a haiku once, with the correct syllable count, explaining why I don't like writing haikus. It's in the archives somewhere, but so far I can't find it. I may have to search through the 'old place'. But not tonight.
I've been writing ever since I realised I could. Storytelling since I started talking. Poetry however comes and goes