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Sanskrit

Posted: Sat May 05, 2018 8:29 pm
by Colm Roe
Pure as a monk
and sky-clad
I entered this world
and regardless of time 
shedding skin
and generic Sunday service absolution
under my clothes
karma's pock marks 
like join-the-dots
proliferate invisible 
not as bad as the last time
but not good enough
to send me skyward 
this time.

 
 

Re: Sanskrit

Posted: Sun May 06, 2018 8:37 am
by indar
Nice use of a recent theme, Colm. I'm impressed by how quickly you were able to turn it to your main, ongoing discussion. The Jainist element works beautifully.

Re: Sanskrit

Posted: Sun May 06, 2018 7:50 pm
by Colm Roe
Thanks Linda.
And thanks again for reconnecting me to that sect. I have thought about them often, and now think, if we do reincarnate, I used to be one and hated the discomfort so much I regressed to my current state  :roll:
Still loving 'Sky-clad'. Don't be surprised if I use it often  :)
 

Re: Sanskrit

Posted: Fri May 11, 2018 12:10 pm
by Tracy Mitchell
karma's pock marks 
:D :D :D :D :D