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male bull

Posted: Tue Mar 13, 2018 9:52 am
by Dave
In truth this is a found poem and the words not really mine:
Fearless girl confronts the bull,
corrupts his integrity.
Male fragility writes itself.

Re: male bull

Posted: Sun Mar 18, 2018 4:43 pm
by Tracy Mitchell
Love it.  A found poem American Sentence. 

I could think - spawns itself, but as written it feels right. 

For an American Sentence, technically the period in the middle should be something else -- em-dash or en-dash, colon, semi-colon;  anything but the sentence ending period.  but who wants to get technical?

& perhaps the title is redundant.  In fact"Bull" standing alone might increase the play.

T