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Dave
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morsels

Post by Dave » Fri Jan 26, 2018 4:55 am

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Last edited by Dave on Mon Sep 07, 2020 5:27 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Sharon Leigh
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Re: morsels

Post by Sharon Leigh » Fri Jan 26, 2018 8:33 am

Like these morsels, dave, little bites. Kernals = kernels? No nits, except L1 of the 4th morsel, I like "sweet" and "smooth", but the extra sweet and repeat of honey bump a bit for me. Overall, enjoyed!

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Sharon
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