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Heard From a Porch

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binx
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Heard From a Porch

Post by binx » Thu Feb 08, 2024 11:20 am

The sound of trains
coupling from the yard

 hammers a rhythm
in my blood 

not about humans
or God 

but about a revolution
or a medley of steel stars

Dave
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Re: Heard From a Porch

Post by Dave » Fri Feb 09, 2024 1:17 am

I enjoyed this bery much. Nothing like the sound of trains in he distance as even Paul Simon knew. Nice juxtaposition of ideas in God and revolution

binx
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Re: Heard From a Porch

Post by binx » Fri Feb 09, 2024 10:28 am

Thanks, Dave. Heard train sounds at an early age. 

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