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Words

Posted: Fri Nov 03, 2023 8:42 pm
by Colm Roe
Words are losing 
diluted 
in a sea of themselves 
unsupervised or
super-supervised
even golems regurgitate
refuse requests

silence would be nice
written words only
my specific God has had enough
only accepts hand-written letters

like me 
there are many who'll try
but we haven't a clue 
what address to post it to

and even if we found it
I just know
it would be
returned to sender.



 

 

Re: Words

Posted: Sat Nov 04, 2023 5:05 am
by Mark
Censored letters to God consigned to the trash heap. Powerful and apposite.

Re: Words

Posted: Sat Nov 04, 2023 9:05 pm
by Colm Roe
We'll find out one day, Mark. Or maybe we'll find nothing... both are good, unless it's a vengeful God... then we're fucked  :lol:

Re: Words

Posted: Sun Nov 05, 2023 3:32 pm
by Mark
Indeed.
Re-reading your piece... it's a good write, has weight and depth. 

Re: Words

Posted: Mon Nov 06, 2023 12:31 pm
by skylightgreg
Highly imaginative write.  A fun read.

I'm wondering what your specific God might have to say about the written versus the spoken word.

Re: Words

Posted: Mon Nov 06, 2023 2:29 pm
by Colm Roe
skylightgreg wrote:
Mon Nov 06, 2023 12:31 pm
I'm wondering what your specific God might have to say about the written versus the spoken word.

They mostly claim to be all knowing... so maybe it don't make no never mind :)
Thanks for your comments, Greg.