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Leaving the Nest

Posted: Thu Oct 19, 2023 3:49 pm
by Tracy Mitchell
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    Leaving the Nest

I want you to go into the woods
where life is lush with surplus

I want you to listen, be healthy 
and grow fat in smatterings
of pregnant sunshine

watch a red squirrel skinny
down a quavering branch 
toward inexperienced leaves.

~

Re: Leaving the Nest

Posted: Thu Oct 19, 2023 4:09 pm
by Gyppo
'smatterings of pregnant sunshine'

'inexperienced leaves'.

This whole thing has left me with a smile on my face, but these two phrases stand out for me.

My 86 year old neighbour has taken to feeding the squirrels in her back garden, says they're far more interesting than most of what she sees on television.  She lays a trail of monkey nuts across the grass just outside her French Windows , and they run along the fence and then visit  her.

Time with nature is never wasted.

Gyppo

Re: Leaving the Nest

Posted: Fri Oct 20, 2023 5:13 pm
by Tracy Mitchell
Gyppo— glad your neighbor is establishing a beneficial detente with her local squirrels.  My son and his family in St. Paul are being met with a squirrel population which has apparently achieved critical mass.  They spent 4 days stripping foliage from the oaks in order to harvest the nuts.. they have also made gardening an adversarial proceeding.

T

Re: Leaving the Nest

Posted: Fri Oct 20, 2023 5:30 pm
by Gyppo
The little sods sometimes dig up things I've planted in order to bury their own gatherings.  But I've not shot any since I moved in here.  The occasional rats have been less lucky.

Re: Leaving the Nest

Posted: Sun Oct 22, 2023 7:46 am
by Dave
Simple clear and sweetly playful. Nice write.
The grey squirrals came from America to Europe and bullied the reds follwed by Black squirrals bullying the greys. A funny lot.

Re: Leaving the Nest

Posted: Sun Oct 22, 2023 8:54 am
by Tracy Mitchell
Quite the pecking order!
Thanks Dave.

T

Re: Leaving the Nest

Posted: Tue Oct 31, 2023 4:30 pm
by Mark
No squirrels in my neck of the no-woods. Nice to stumble across a TM nature study poem.

Re: Leaving the Nest

Posted: Tue Nov 07, 2023 9:59 am
by skylightgreg
Enjoyable read.

I love the way implied colors (of yellow) are splashed against the reds of the squirrel. --Makes for a word painting.   :)