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Leaning back and looking up

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Colm Roe
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Re: Leaning back and looking up

Post by Colm Roe » Sat Jan 09, 2021 7:38 pm

S2 is better.
I prefer the original S1.
The other changes, on first view, appear cosmetic?

But what if the Earth is flat  :)



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Tracy Mitchell
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Re: Leaning back and looking up

Post by Tracy Mitchell » Sun Jan 10, 2021 5:34 pm

Thanks for the revisit, Colm.

S.1 -- the original is closer to plant-based, the revision more. . . feral.
S.2 -- yes, more straight forward.

What if the earth is flat?
1. The plane would not be maintaining constant altitude.
2. Cats would have pushed everything off the edge by now.
3. I would owe my radical right chum a beer.
4. You and Dave would need to work out a new physics.

Cheers.

T

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Colm Roe
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Re: Leaning back and looking up

Post by Colm Roe » Sun Jan 10, 2021 6:17 pm

Yes, the cats would have  :lol:

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