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murmac
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Post by murmac » Mon Mar 30, 2020 3:22 pm

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indar
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Re: First pair of shoes

Post by indar » Mon Mar 30, 2020 7:47 pm

Reading your writing seems to end up making me feel I've gone full circle somehow. Although I might not know all the refernces I feel that you have resolved something for yourself and there is satifaction in that. 

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Post by murmac » Mon Mar 30, 2020 9:52 pm

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Tracy Mitchell
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Re: First pair of shoes

Post by Tracy Mitchell » Mon Mar 30, 2020 10:11 pm

This has a nice beat which doesn't necessarily come through in the text, but does so when read aloud. The accompanying sounds & word play are very pleasant.

I agree with Indar - full circle feel to it.

A personal circle, anyway.

Thanks for posting.

T

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