Sou’easter

[Mark]

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These silly little leaves are a problem for me
when wind blasts the town from off of the sea,
they skitter in past the door so freely and easily
and unfortunately, I won't just saw down the tree.

 

[Tracy Mitchell]

Nice quad, Mark.  

With a little fiddling, the lines can adjust to iambic pentameter.  I think that would make the rhymes so much more effective.  

Just my view.

Cheers.

t

[poet-e]

Clever.  Maybe more imagery?  Colors, how leaves look inside?

My dad wants to saw down my neighbor's tree...