Another Still Life

Tim J Brennan · Post by **Tim J Brennan** » Fri Jan 24, 2020 7:29 pm

All the peonies I left
for her have died
of remorse

Nothing lasts,
not even
a loved man

Dave · Post by **Dave** » Mon Jan 27, 2020 2:56 pm

Hey Tim
Love each stanza on its own. Two fully formed poems.
Dave

Deb · Post by **Deb** » Tue Jan 28, 2020 12:54 am

Ooh, straight to the punch on both stanzas. Me likes.

Tim J Brennan · Post by **Tim J Brennan** » Tue Jan 28, 2020 8:17 am

Dave wrote: ↑
Mon Jan 27, 2020 2:56 pm
Hey Tim
Love each stanza on its own. Two fully formed poems.
Dave

Hence the format, Dave. Thanks. Appreciate the look/read.

Tim J Brennan · Post by **Tim J Brennan** » Tue Jan 28, 2020 8:18 am

Deb wrote: ↑
Tue Jan 28, 2020 12:54 am
Ooh, straight to the punch on both stanzas. Me likes.

Thank you, Deb. I owned a Rock 'Em / Sock 'Em robot set when I was a kid.

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