General Poetry - post, comment, review, critique
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Tim J Brennan
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by Tim J Brennan » Fri Jan 24, 2020 7:29 pm
All the peonies I left
for her have died
of remorse
Nothing lasts,
not even
a loved man
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Dave
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by Dave » Mon Jan 27, 2020 2:56 pm
Hey Tim
Love each stanza on its own. Two fully formed poems.
Dave
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Deb
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by Deb » Tue Jan 28, 2020 12:54 am
Ooh, straight to the punch on both stanzas. Me likes.
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Tim J Brennan
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by Tim J Brennan » Tue Jan 28, 2020 8:17 am
Dave wrote: ↑Mon Jan 27, 2020 2:56 pm
Hey Tim
Love each stanza on its own. Two fully formed poems.
Dave
Hence the format, Dave. Thanks. Appreciate the look/read.
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Tim J Brennan
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by Tim J Brennan » Tue Jan 28, 2020 8:18 am
Deb wrote: ↑Tue Jan 28, 2020 12:54 am
Ooh, straight to the punch on both stanzas. Me likes.
Thank you, Deb. I owned a Rock 'Em / Sock 'Em robot set when I was a kid.