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A poem that lost its voice
Posted: Mon Jan 13, 2020 9:34 pm
by Matty11
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Re: A poem that lost its voice
Posted: Tue Jan 14, 2020 12:53 pm
by Tracy Mitchell
Love this Phil.
Awesome opening line -- so graphic.
S.2 L.1 -- delete "the"? - just asking.
Cheers.
T
Re: A poem that lost its voice
Posted: Tue Jan 14, 2020 6:32 pm
by Colm Roe
That's a neat little poem Phil
Re: A poem that lost its voice
Posted: Wed Jan 15, 2020 9:42 pm
by Sharon Leigh
Wonderful, kept wanting there to be some allusion to the waters being "shallow" too
Re: A poem that lost its voice
Posted: Thu Jan 16, 2020 1:10 pm
by Trish Saunders
Usually avoid poems about poems but I enjoyed this very much, with its brief, biting images.
Re: A poem that lost its voice
Posted: Fri Jan 17, 2020 8:35 pm
by Matty11
Thanks Trish, Sharon, Colm and T.
S.2 L.1 -- delete "the"?
Agreed T. Thanks for that.
cheers
phil