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Re: Better Than This

Posted: Thu Jan 16, 2020 12:56 pm
by Trish Saunders
I love this strange short poem, Tracy. I did not know Monte Hall had such a wish. (Shakespeare, not Lets Make a Deal? As if.) 

The poem's rueful tone is well done, understated. I'm not sure the final line is needed, though. I very much enjoyed the read.

 
 

Re: Better Than This

Posted: Thu Jan 16, 2020 1:13 pm
by Tracy Mitchell
Thanks Trish for the kind words. 

I chuckle because invariably Tom Riordon's comment to me was 'cut the last line'.   :)

Of course he was usually right, and I think you are right with this as well.

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