Re: Better Than This
Posted: Thu Jan 16, 2020 12:56 pm
I love this strange short poem, Tracy. I did not know Monte Hall had such a wish. (Shakespeare, not Lets Make a Deal? As if.)
The poem's rueful tone is well done, understated. I'm not sure the final line is needed, though. I very much enjoyed the read.
The poem's rueful tone is well done, understated. I'm not sure the final line is needed, though. I very much enjoyed the read.