I immediately got the wasp/friend connection.
I just found some of the (wasp) intent confusing.
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Re: Bodies
Dave, your poetry is always thought-provoking. My thick skull took a bit to put the pieces together on this. Once I got it, I liked it. S3 L4 and L5 are brilliant in my humble opinion.
Thanks for making my brain work on something dripping with imagery.
Deb
Thanks for making my brain work on something dripping with imagery.
Deb
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Re: Bodies
lovely, sad, and well written, especially that third stanza!
"well for a lonely soul, you're having such a nice time" - Keane
Re: Bodies
Thanks everyone - Colm, Deb and Sharon.