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Posted: Wed Oct 17, 2018 7:14 am
by Saravanan
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Re: To my beloved one
Posted: Wed Oct 17, 2018 9:44 am
by HLemma
Hi Saravanan..I have to be honest. This is too weighed down with melodrama and clichés. It needs some concrete images to hold it together.