I think I wrote this for Napo two or three years ago. Recalling a more innocent time.
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Carling with Cathy
Sitting on my Gran's gate
in the sunshine,
sharing a can of Carling.
Black label no less,
with the girl next door.
Tall enough to get served
at fourteen, and a 'smooth git',
a polished little lady-killer
(in manners at least)
until I tripped over my own hormones.
Her mum came out,
screaming like a banshee,
calling me words I'd never heard
and banished her to her room.
I went through to Gran's back garden.
Cathy was already leaning from her window.
So I perched on the washhouse roof,
passed the can up to her,
and we played Romeo and Juliet
'til the can was empty.
Gyppo
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Carling with Cathy. Another one from few years back.
Carling with Cathy. Another one from few years back.
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Re: Carling with Cathy. Another one from few years back.
I saw the Romeo line coming, which didn't lessen it's heft.
Another heartwarming story.
Favorite phrase: until I tripped over my own hormones
Stories of my doing so are no where near so endearing.
T
Another heartwarming story.
Favorite phrase: until I tripped over my own hormones
Stories of my doing so are no where near so endearing.
T
Re: Carling with Cathy. Another one from few years back.
Tracy Mitchell wrote: ↑Fri May 11, 2018 1:53 pmI saw the Romeo line coming, which didn't lessen it's heft.
Another heartwarming story.
Favorite phrase: until I tripped over my own hormones
Stories of my doing so are no where near so endearing.
T
The structure of the two wash-houses was one building, despite a very solid wall between them. Clambering up on the joint roof was a solution just screaming out to be exploited. My biggest fear was that I might spill the can whilst negotiating the overhanging lip of the concrete slab roof.
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As for 'tripping over my own hormones', time and age allows me to look upon these moments with a more gentle perspective. There are still plenty of memories to make me cringe though.
I revisited Gran's road a few years ago with my daughter and was pointing things out to her. She was fascinated and made the point that I was reliving events, not just remembering.
Gyppo
I've been writing ever since I realised I could. Storytelling since I started talking. Poetry however comes and goes