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Dave
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male bull

Post by Dave » Tue Mar 13, 2018 9:52 am

In truth this is a found poem and the words not really mine:
Fearless girl confronts the bull,
corrupts his integrity.
Male fragility writes itself.
Last edited by Dave on Sun Oct 21, 2018 9:38 am, edited 1 time in total.

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Tracy Mitchell
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Re: male bull

Post by Tracy Mitchell » Sun Mar 18, 2018 4:43 pm

Love it.  A found poem American Sentence. 

I could think - spawns itself, but as written it feels right. 

For an American Sentence, technically the period in the middle should be something else -- em-dash or en-dash, colon, semi-colon;  anything but the sentence ending period.  but who wants to get technical?

& perhaps the title is redundant.  In fact"Bull" standing alone might increase the play.

T

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