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[Mark]

Just wondering about capitalizing the last line as a new sentence. Good, atmospheric writing, Catherine. I think the influence of English being a secondary language benefits your writing (you'll probably disagree) in terms of original phrasing and word choices as pointed out by gaviano. Whatever it is, the outcome makes for pleasant reading, I really enjoy your poems. Thanks for posting.

[Catherine]

Thank you all for your feedback. And yes,  I agree with you Mark about writing in a second language, it does affect the result...
Sorry for not being very present I'm kept busy busy busy by boring stuff.