Welcome to The Tangled Branch!  Join us.

Poem

General Poetry - post, comment, review, critique
Dave
Posts: 2132
Joined: Mon Jan 08, 2018 9:07 am

Re: Poem

Post by Dave » Mon Jan 22, 2018 7:16 am

Hi Mark
A very beautiful and intense poem that captures the spirit and profundity of beauty. Thanks

Bev
Posts: 8
Joined: Sun Jan 21, 2018 4:19 am
Location: Vietnam

Re: Poem

Post by Bev » Mon Jan 22, 2018 8:59 pm

This is beautiful. These struck me the most, at first 

green with velvet lavender and plumbago blue,
shaded bouquets unfolding the first scents of dew

I love gardening and the beautiful gardens in South Africa, which is my home country. These two lines pull on all the senses making the reader "experience" being in the scene.

I read it a few times and it's all very vivid and has a tactile feel to it.

User avatar
Mark
Posts: 588
Joined: Sun Jan 07, 2018 4:19 am

Re: Poem

Post by Mark » Tue Jan 23, 2018 6:44 am

Thanks for reading and kind comments, Daryl, Dave & Bev. I'm glad you enjoyed the piece.
Daryl, it's great to see you back in the mix after your sabbatical. Nice to see you posting again, Dave. And Bev - another blerrie Saffa - who let you in? :mrgreen:

Post Reply