Hi Mark
A very beautiful and intense poem that captures the spirit and profundity of beauty. Thanks
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This is beautiful. These struck me the most, at first
green with velvet lavender and plumbago blue,
shaded bouquets unfolding the first scents of dew
I love gardening and the beautiful gardens in South Africa, which is my home country. These two lines pull on all the senses making the reader "experience" being in the scene.
I read it a few times and it's all very vivid and has a tactile feel to it.
green with velvet lavender and plumbago blue,
shaded bouquets unfolding the first scents of dew
I love gardening and the beautiful gardens in South Africa, which is my home country. These two lines pull on all the senses making the reader "experience" being in the scene.
I read it a few times and it's all very vivid and has a tactile feel to it.
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Thanks for reading and kind comments, Daryl, Dave & Bev. I'm glad you enjoyed the piece.
Daryl, it's great to see you back in the mix after your sabbatical. Nice to see you posting again, Dave. And Bev - another blerrie Saffa - who let you in?
Daryl, it's great to see you back in the mix after your sabbatical. Nice to see you posting again, Dave. And Bev - another blerrie Saffa - who let you in?