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Vaughn Neeld wrote: ↑
Tue Apr 09, 2019 8:37 am
Day 9

Yesterday, pastures
beyond the fence
lay sere.

Today, pastures
beyond the fence
spring green.

Vaughn - so few words, so expansive the visual - beautiful

ajduclos

Gyppo. Your poem "Maureen" just hit me in the solar plexus. I also used to get comments like that: "You couldn't have done it." I did, and I know you did too. Love your poetry. Von Gyppo - just now read Maureen - buckled my knees. Buckled my knees as it hit Vaughn in the gut. Heard some of that, ...

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Tracy Mitchell wrote: ↑
Tue Apr 09, 2019 7:42 am
#9

Actuate

Collect semen from a dead guy?
The Church isn’t ready to talk.
His wife isn’t ready for a family.
His parents aren’t ready to let go.
No disrespect intended, but Darwin
would turn over in his casket
if he were alive today.

Tracy ~ you nailed it - love the ready repetition

ajduclos

"I don't believe in art. I believe in artists. - Marcel Duchamp

amazing spin around the sun, DonCon

ajduclos

aahhhhh... my name... lines that look like sadness... beautiful, evocative

ajduclos

What an amazingly challenging prospect -- you'd never regret it, I think. :) Tracy, if I were to try to do an album of songs from the April Poetry Month challenge, how would you suggest I approach it? Perhaps I/we/others could chose those that seems to have some lyrical life? Perhaps one from eac...

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Wow, Tracy - like stream of consciousness intricately and purposefully interwoven............ Ya, nowadays composing music comes fairly easily to me... I often wonder when I write: does the poem inform the music, or the music inform the poem. Tightly connected, I think. I've written many many son...

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Thanks Tracy - it's already a song, all done - that's the easy part for me, how my brain works (or not!!!).....
That being said I've just now composed new music for it............

ajduclos

Day 8 Posted in recognition of the winter snows of today, April 8th........... March Mud... Sparkling bright sunny day Snow and ice glisten away Yet the breeze thru barren trees Sings an icy Spring tease March Mud may peek and lurk Around high sun and smirk With smug conviction that soon Muck w...

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Thanks you, DonCon, for your kind words.

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