Highly underrated - Vogon Poetry - liberating, enervating, befuzzling:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=A8JJH7ZL_Fk
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- Tue Jan 23, 2018 12:11 pm
- Forum: The Commons
- Topic: Worth Hearing
- Replies: 3
- Views: 5719
- Tue Jan 23, 2018 12:04 pm
- Forum: The Commons
- Topic: Favorite Quotes
- Replies: 32
- Views: 45051
Re: Favorite Quotes
There are two sounds in the world which don't have to mean anything -- music, and laughter. Immanuel Kant
- Tue Jan 23, 2018 11:59 am
- Forum: The Commons
- Topic: Worth Hearing
- Replies: 3
- Views: 5719
Worth Hearing
Richard Burton reciting 'The Greatest Poem in the English Language'
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fDNCEp8Utjo
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fDNCEp8Utjo
- Mon Jan 22, 2018 2:59 pm
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: Dirty Laundry
- Replies: 17
- Views: 12367
Re: Dirty Laundry
What a charming and engaging list poem. I love the inclusions- clementines and Mad magazine. And of course the neighbors' family underwear collection. :D Small matter - I hung up for a moment S.2 L.2 - it feels like 'overhead' needs to come later in the phrase. Just a thought. Love the poem, Tim. &...
- Mon Jan 22, 2018 1:29 pm
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: spires
- Replies: 8
- Views: 6577
Re: spires
I thought that was the case - thus my cavalier comment.
I look forward to your getting the way you want.
T
I look forward to your getting the way you want.
T
- Mon Jan 22, 2018 1:28 pm
- Forum: Introduce Yourself Here
- Topic: Me
- Replies: 5
- Views: 5254
Re: Me
Hi Tim!
Full disclosure- lifetime in Minnesota, now I am eagerly retired to the splendor of Colorado.
So good to see you here.
Any questions, ask Sharon.
T
Full disclosure- lifetime in Minnesota, now I am eagerly retired to the splendor of Colorado.
So good to see you here.
Any questions, ask Sharon.
T
- Mon Jan 22, 2018 9:21 am
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: spires
- Replies: 8
- Views: 6577
Re: spires
Good sentiment, could use some more line endings.
T
T
- Sun Jan 21, 2018 11:02 am
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: Clay Formed (a rework)
- Replies: 12
- Views: 9649
Re: Clay Formed (a rework)
Your Narrator paints with a broad brush in this introspective. Personal, and yet very relate-able ruminations. Everything seems to work except the opening line- great line, but the poem strikes me as about something different. If the first line were to disappear, the consider cutting the last two w...
- Sun Jan 21, 2018 10:46 am
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: Synopsis
- Replies: 5
- Views: 8923
Re: Synopsis
I read Michener's Hawaii and that was something. A burble a mile beneath the surface of the Pacific, and 80 pages later, an island. The man knows how to research, and how to pack every protozoan tidbit of research into his novels. But I only read it once. :) I like the poem more than the ending....
- Sun Jan 21, 2018 10:36 am
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: Neptune on a Wednesday
- Replies: 22
- Views: 16260
Re: Neptune on a Wednesday
Excellent poeming - no nits from me.