There is also a sweet meaning were you to swap the words, "You" with "We" or "Us."
Can you tell I'm missing my husband?
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- Tue Jan 28, 2020 12:26 am
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: Edibles & Mead
- Replies: 7
- Views: 7356
- Tue Jan 28, 2020 12:11 am
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: Glove Box
- Replies: 15
- Views: 11455
- Mon Jan 27, 2020 11:50 pm
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: Edibles & Mead
- Replies: 7
- Views: 7356
Re: Edibles & Mead
After drinking a gift of homemade mead with a friend tonight, this is what I ended up with. It seemed like a good idea at the time. In the morning, I fear a palm to the forehead reaction from myself and firm talking to from the sensible among us, meaning you. Why I thought it would be okay to do so...
- Mon Jan 27, 2020 11:10 pm
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: Edibles & Mead
- Replies: 7
- Views: 7356
Edibles & Mead
Edibles & Mead A writer delves into the depths of a character’s being. Comes out a different person, a rebuilt soul. The crux of empathy, tragedy, reality, imagination and fear. The essence of hope and misguided missiles Thin threads that bind... we weave threads for a dare to promise a promise to ...
- Sat Jan 11, 2020 6:26 pm
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: Better Than This
- Replies: 11
- Views: 8070
Re: Better Than This
Fun read. It ended with a chuckle from me. This also brought back memories. Remember Carol Merrill and the fur coats from Dicker and Dicker of Beverly Hills?
~Deb
~Deb
- Sat Jan 11, 2020 6:15 pm
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: Spectacle of Death
- Replies: 18
- Views: 11459
Re: Spectacle of Death
Good lord, Deb... you have much pain and loss and memories to chew on. I hurt for you........... Been thinking about S5-L4 in "Spectacle of Death". Perhaps "before regret-filled sighs"........... just a thought. I do like the way S5 continues and broadens the thoughts in S4. Take a breath... and...
- Sat Jan 11, 2020 3:20 am
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: sign language
- Replies: 5
- Views: 3907
Re: sign language
Dave, You've done a beautiful job of cleverly weaving the drought theme in a decaying environment. I enjoyed this and will return to read it again. I wonder if leaving out, "the" in the last line would give it a bigger punch. Just a thought. It works fine as it is. You've painted a colorfully, som...
- Sat Jan 11, 2020 3:15 am
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: Glove Box
- Replies: 15
- Views: 11455
Re: Glove Box
I enjoy a love poem that doesn't drip the word, love.
S3 could be about me and my husband. The last line is golden.
~Deb
S3 could be about me and my husband. The last line is golden.
~Deb
- Sat Jan 11, 2020 3:06 am
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: Spectacle of Death
- Replies: 18
- Views: 11459
Re: Spectacle of Death
Wow. Thanks, you guys. I'm feeling encouraged. I will come back to this but my brain needs to soak in yet three more deaths that I learned of today. I was notified my ex-boyfriend's parents passed away three days apart from each other on December 27th and December 30th. He and I lived together for o...
- Thu Jan 09, 2020 4:41 am
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: Spectacle of Death
- Replies: 18
- Views: 11459
Re: Spectacle of Death
When I post, I'm not aware of whether I'm posting my efforts or posting a vent because when I'm venting it feels good, therefore it sounds, not too awfully bad. If I do not post it, and there is hope but it is bad, I won't get feedback. At the same time, some things are not worthy of wasting peop...