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by Wren Tuatha
Mon Aug 27, 2018 6:44 pm
Forum: The Commons
Topic: LIMITS OF NARRATIVE POEMS
Replies: 3
Views: 11332

Re: LIMITS OF NARRATIVE POEMS

I'm glad to see this topic here. Hi, Nicole! I have to say I really don't prefer narrative poetry. Just as a reader, I often think, "this should just be a story." I'm just talking about my own preferences, of course. I love poetry where the images do all the heavy lifting. That said, I do see some n...
by Wren Tuatha
Sun Aug 26, 2018 4:31 pm
Forum: Post Your Poems
Topic: A Lie is always a Lie
Replies: 11
Views: 7664

Re: A Lie is always a Lie

Hi Tim, I especially like the long tether. I picture it getting a bit tangled in the drapes. The last 2 stanzas seem to have a change in tone/energy, maybe trying a little too hard to wrap the bow. Magnanimous feels wordy compared to the rest. Not sure about the title, other than the new headline th...
by Wren Tuatha
Sun Aug 26, 2018 4:07 pm
Forum: Introduce Yourself Here
Topic: Wren Here
Replies: 4
Views: 11004

Wren Here

Hello All, I got an invitation from Tracy a while back. I haven't had much time to write but I recently got a manuscript accepted and I want to get real about tightening up all my poems. I've learned a lot from participating in online groups in the past. I'm looking forward to reading others' poems ...