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- Fri Mar 15, 2019 3:59 pm
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: A Recurring Thought of the Spirit Mother
- Replies: 15
- Views: 10329
A Recurring Thought of the Spirit Mother
~ A Recurring Thought of the Spirit Mother Some sound equivalent of neon sign lettering outlines my body, then seizes my ontological self in multiples, elongating like accordion bellows toward rhapsodies of raspberry and honey. I am turned to liquid, a liquid music surging like mountain creeks in sp...
- Fri Mar 15, 2019 3:53 pm
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: Jennifer, Not Here
- Replies: 8
- Views: 5973
Re: Jennifer, Not Here
This is wonderful, George. Beautiful.
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- Fri Mar 15, 2019 3:51 pm
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: Isle of Pines
- Replies: 20
- Views: 13677
Re: Isle of Pines
Isn't it a delight to occasionally rediscover how lines seem to hum more without that pronoun? Love these descriptions, Indar. I got Innesfree reference, but missed Oz. Instead, I pictured Island Lake, south of Hibbing, Mn. Rising pines as seen from lakeside fit this so well. S.1 L.6 - that > who ? ...
- Fri Mar 15, 2019 3:41 pm
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: WHAT IF I SAID I LOVE YOU?
- Replies: 2
- Views: 2690
Re: WHAT IF I SAID I LOVE YOU?
I can tell you put some time into this and there is the obvious passion. To communicate better, however, the reader needs to given more. As it is, we have a Narrator who purports to love someone who the N idealizes as a 'dazzling angel', has pictures of her on his 'mobile device', and writes her und...
- Fri Mar 15, 2019 3:28 pm
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: Night Dialogue
- Replies: 22
- Views: 14742
Re: Night Dialogue
Good poem, George. You have made this personal, intimate. Consider this and see what you think:
Through the bedroom
window, a A layer of new
snow veils the field.
Let me know if you want me to argue the change
Thanks for posting.
T
Through the bedroom
window, a A layer of new
snow veils the field.
Let me know if you want me to argue the change
Thanks for posting.
T
- Fri Mar 15, 2019 3:22 pm
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: For My Mother
- Replies: 4
- Views: 3625
Re: For My Mother
I really like this poem. It gets to the heart of the matter without undue sentimentality. It speaks as an adult. My favorite lines are these: any more than I can reach what cannot be again. My love did not die with her - it became vagrant, Wonderful writing. The word "shrieks" struck me as well, but...
- Fri Mar 15, 2019 3:14 pm
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: Noting The Passing of Nelson Mandela
- Replies: 7
- Views: 5016
Re: Noting The Passing of Nelson Mandela
Thanks, Hugh, for the the very kind words.
Cheers.
T
Cheers.
T
- Fri Mar 15, 2019 3:13 pm
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: Volta
- Replies: 7
- Views: 5020
Re: Volta
I love the way the opening line brings the power -- somber, depressing and perfectly metered. I needed to google some instant research to refresh my recall, but became more confused. The wrathful angels I take to be those who opposed Jannes and Jambres, who haven't yet [in the poem] launched their f...
- Thu Mar 07, 2019 1:11 pm
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: Another Animal Extinct
- Replies: 7
- Views: 4844
- Thu Mar 07, 2019 6:52 am
- Forum: Post Your Poems
- Topic: their way to love
- Replies: 15
- Views: 9773
Re: their way to love
Cool. Thanks.