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Welcome Indar! So glad you're here.

Hi Dan, welcome! Glad you made it

. Start at the end. Begin where the mess smells, work backward in large strokes. Put your elbow into it. Decrease, recede. Pull color into bristles once again, soak the ocher, umber of the last text bitter into turpentine. Scrub, repeat. Aspirate the last kiss, swirling red, don't watch. Spin your v...

Oh I love this. It's fun and lighthearted, yet w a strength throughout. Especially enjoy the freshness, each word carefully placed and doing its thing. Enjoyed!

Best,
Sharon

Lol Marc. I think I remember this, wasn't it in some part a response to a piece I'd written on the old forum's "Poem Love Story Poem"-? Maybe not, dunno. The one I'd written was simply dictating an actual dream I'd had one night. Not to make it all about me :roll: Anyway, I like it, brings to mind t...

Yikes- v effective, the desperation. Sad! Do...insects even have vital organs? Probably

Well written!

Best,
Sharon

Oh I like the brevity here, and the way this reads, smooth as the subject. The 4 "forever"s almost foreboding, but that may just be my bias

Much enjoyed

Ha!

And the rabbit to the left is writer's block-?

Thank you, Kate! And phil, (& Kate) as to the "peach/livid" line, I was attempting to paint a certain quality of light, where it's overcast yet somehow colors are saturated and intensified, almost neon. So yes, flesh, against tall greens.

Thanks much Phil! Yes, I did need a question mark there, changed now. Appreciate your looking in!

Best,
Sharon