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Nice poem Aj.
The repeating line works really well...an echoing voice of hope

Nice poeming Tracy

Thanks Linda.
Unlike you, I didn't experience death or 'near death'. It was a scuba diving incident that could have been fatal; luckily my training eventually kicked in... Stop-Think-Act

Glad liked it Janet and Aj

Nice read Marcel... especially when spoken loud, with an angry voice

Another nice one Dave.
Love the 'children growing in and out of personalities we dressed for them' lines.
Keep your port aft

Excellent poem Janet.
'waiting for the future to be born' is a fantastic way to finish.

The other side of the coin is we are being introduced to the difficult concept of living in the present

Neat poem Heidi.
It certainly puts the current situation into perspective.
Excellent read.

Interesting poems Mark... I'd expect nothing less.
I enjoyed them both; great to see you here

Deb, I love the drama in this; it really needs to be spoken...loud!
Poor old Prometheus, even today he's still being tortured, and for what? We owe him a great debt, although I know some might disagree
Fab read.