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thanks, guys.   again, this one needs a lot of consideration.  i have definitely learned to emphasize verbs in my writing.  it does make all the difference.

i'll look at this with fresh eyes in a month or two.

you know, near every podiatrist on the continent is notorious for sticking foot in mouth.  sorry.  i had to.  

beautiful poem.

this poem needs a lot of work.  but the revisions won't be that difficult to make.

thanks, guys.

thank-you, Tracy.  I was just going through poems to keep for a collection to be included with other poets.  I'll mark this one a keeper.

just saw this by the way.  lol.